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Summary: A police commander and seven officers have been arrested for the killing of a judge. The Rio de Janeiro State police said that six of the officers were detained Tuesday; the other two were arrested earlier. The judge, Patricia Acioli, who was known for being tough on rogue police officers who turned to vigilantism and extorted money, was shot in August outside her house in Niterói.
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David Orzechowski - 1º C, nº 08
Natalie Stiebler - 1º B, nº 20
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ResponderExcluirVictor Hugo 1ºB
We agree with Natalie and David's commentary and is sad and are released for all world and the people who are not brazilians have a wrong vision about the country.
ResponderExcluirGiulia Ghigonetto and Luiza Mariutti
Cops killed a judge! Looks like she was right to be so hard on them, those were bullies not cops. RIP.
ResponderExcluirThanks for posting. Candy Williams